Why is there a(an) Occupy Houston or Wall Street ? There is no clear focus on fixing anything. Ask 10 protesters why they are there or what are you(they are) protesting (, and you) get 10 different answers. Protesting not having a job, that makes sence(sense). How about (you) going(go) and spend time looking for a job instead of standing around doing nothing but holding a sign,(.) (It is)no different than standing under the freeway.
Look(,) are you made(mad) at some guys(guy) who has worked hard and built a maga(mega) business,(?) isn't (Isn't) that the American dream.(?) Work hard (, and you will) make lots of money.
Don't be made(mad) because a bank gave you a loan for a house that You (you) couldn't afford and now it's in forclosure(.) You knew you couldn't afford it when you bought it. Us commen(common) sense America,(.) You want F(f)reedom with no R(r)esponsiblity. Wake( )up, your(you're) not a victim(,) your(you're) the problem…
Normally I'm not a grammar freak, but this is atrocious. Also, read more about Occupy Houston, and you will realize that everything you said was not well thought out.